Strange-1's art Reviews on Newgrounds

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First of all, don't be so hard on yourself! Degrading your work in the comments automatically makes people think less of it.

I think this is very well done. I really like the shading and highlighting on the black part of his costume.

I think the highlighting on the face is a little harsh. It makes his face look "shiny" and it's also a little difficult to tell where the light is coming from. (I'm guessing it's backlighting, mixed with some dramatic lighting from directly above him, yet this doesn't quite make sense for where the light is landing on his cheeks.)

The proportions look good except his right eye appears to be larger and slightly higher than the left. I'd recommend flipping the image horizontally part way through your drawing to make sure nothing stands out as being misproportioned.

I think you achieved a serious and dramatic portrait.

bocodamondo responds:

haha i really didnt expected to get a big critic review for this ^^ but yeah.
you are right , the one eye is really higher then the other, however copy and paste and mirror is a very dumb idea to go with. i just have to pay some attention thats all.

but yeah thanks ^^

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This is gorgeous! I love the face and the hair, and the way it looks like she's being sucked into the darkness.

I can only think of a couple of very small critiques:
Her chin seems just slightly too pointed.
And I'd like to see just a little more detail in the dark area. I get that it's supposed to be darkness, but my eyes wonder around just looking for a little bit more detail or depth. I do like the places where you have added this detail, though! Overall it looks great!

AkiCarlito responds:

alright thank you! i'll see what i can do! :)